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RETROL & OKMO N01 1/5 Scale Hit and Miss Vertical Gas Stationary Engine Model RTR

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Sand-Cast Brass

CNC Machined Steel

Mechanical Trip Ignition

Hardwood Display Base

No Electronics

1,500 g · 3.3 lbs

// About This Engine

A Century-Old Cadence, Back on Your Desk

Between 1895 and 1930, the hit-and-miss stationary engine was the backbone of rural America.

Before electric motors reached the countryside, before tractors replaced draft animals, this single-cylinder machine did the work — powering cement mixers on construction sites, water pumps on homesteads, grain mills, sawmills, and feed grinders from coast to coast. Farmers depended on it. Contractors relied on it. It was everywhere.

What set it apart from every engine before or since was its governor. A centrifugal flyweight system that let the engine fire only when it needed to, and coast on pure flywheel inertia the rest of the time. That gave it its sound — that unmistakable clack — clack — clack that anyone who grew up around one never forgets.

Millions were built. Many are still running today, more than a century later.

The RETROL & OKMO N01 faithfully recreates that machine at 1/5 scale.

No plastic in the structural core. No electronics hiding the mechanism. Just sand-cast brass, precision-machined steel, a mechanical trip igniter, and dual heavy flywheels doing exactly what they did in 1900 — holding momentum through the miss, delivering power on the hit.

Every phase of the four-stroke cycle unfolds in full view. The open-crank architecture conceals nothing: piston, connecting rod, ignition points, glass drip oiler, steam hopper — all exposed, all working.

// How It Works

The Hit & Miss Cycle

HIT
Engine drops below set speed
Flyweights retract inward
Exhaust valve closes
Ignition points trip
Power stroke fires
Speed restored
MISS
Engine reaches set speed
Flyweights extend outward
Exhaust valve locks open
No compression · No ignition
Engine coasts on flywheel inertia
"clack — clack — clack"
The governor fires only when needed Inertia carries the rest

// See It Run

Watch the Hit & Miss in Action

The centrifugal governor at work — flyweights extend on the miss, retract on the hit. No tricks. This is exactly what it sounds like on your desk.

// Specifications

Technical Specifications

// RETROL & OKMO N01 — Full Technical Data
Engine TypeHit-and-Miss ICE
Scale1 / 5
Displacement3.6 cc
Bore16.0 mm
Stroke19.0 mm
CycleFour-Stroke
Cylinder LayoutSingle-Cylinder, Vertical
Cooling SystemEvaporative Open-Hopper
Ignition SystemMechanical Trip-Point Igniter
Ignition Power1× AA 1.5V Battery (not included)
Spark Plug Thread3/16-40 Imperial (pre-installed)
Governor TypeCentrifugal Flyweight
LubricationFuel Pre-mix + External Drip Oiler
Fuel-to-Oil Ratio25:1 to 30:1
Recommended Fuel92+ Octane Gasoline
Recommended Oil2-Stroke or 4-Stroke 10W-50
Primary StructureSteel (CNC-Machined)
Decorative HardwareSand-Cast Brass + Aluminum
Surface FinishHigh-Temp Baked Enamel Coat
Display BaseHardwood (pre-mounted)
Overall Dimensions135 × 115 × 195 mm
Product Weight1,500 g (3.3 lb)
Assembly StatusRTR — Ready to Run
Starting MethodsManual Recoil / Electric Drill

// Features

Built Without Compromise

01

Cast + CNC Composite Construction

The structural core starts with premium sand-cast brass — the same process used on full-size industrial hardware — then every critical surface is finish-machined on a CNC center. Tighter tolerances, sharper edges, smoother bores. At 1.5 kg the heft is immediately apparent. This is a piece you pick up once and never put down.

Cast + CNC Composite Process
02

Fully Open-Crank Architecture

Every moving part is exposed. Watch the piston reciprocate, the connecting rod sweep, and the mechanical ignition points trip in real time. All four strokes unfold in front of you — intake, compression, power, exhaust. Nothing hidden, nothing sealed away.

Open Crank · No Cover Plates
03

Visible Glass Drip-Feed Oiler

A fully adjustable glass drip oiler delivers lubrication drop by drop to the crankshaft bearings — visible in real time. The same system that kept full-size early American stationary engines alive on the factory floor, now on your desk. Standard 10W-50 oil, no specialty products required.

Pre-mix + External Drip Oiler
04

Evaporative Hopper Cooling

The open-top water hopper absorbs combustion heat and releases a gentle mist of steam as it evaporates — exactly as it did in the field a century ago. Fill with tap or distilled water, top off for extended runs. No radiator, no pump, no closed loop required.

Open Hopper · Steam Venting

// Manufacturing Upgrade

We Heard You. We Fixed It.

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Cast + CNC. Not Cast Alone.

Early collectors were right to notice: pure casting leaves interior cavities rough, exterior edges soft, and bearing fits inconsistent. The N01 addresses this with a full CNC finishing pass across every critical surface after casting. The result is tighter bearing clearances, cleaner exterior geometry, and an engine that runs more quietly from the first start — not after a break-in period.

Tighter Tolerances · Quieter Running
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Steel Where It Matters.

All-brass construction looks great at unboxing. It wears fast under load. Brass creeps under sustained stress and distorts with heat — which is why early miniature engines developed play in their bearings and lost compression over time. The N01's primary load-bearing components are machined from steel: harder, stronger, dimensionally stable across thousands of cycles. Brass stays where it belongs — as accent hardware and bearing surface.

Steel Core · No Long-Term Wear Creep
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Finish That Lasts.

Early production used spray lacquer — which chips off flywheel edges, fades with heat, and looks worn within a season of running. The N01 uses a high-temperature baked enamel coat bonded directly to the steel substrate. It survives engine heat, vibration, and outdoor humidity without lifting or chalking. The color you receive is the color it keeps.

Baked Enamel · Weather-Resistant
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Metal Sealing Ring. Not Rubber.

Early models used rubber O-rings as the primary cylinder seal. Rubber degrades with heat and fuel exposure — it swells, hardens, and eventually loses its seal, causing compression loss and oil leaks after extended use. The N01 replaces this with a precision-machined metal sealing ring: dimensionally stable at operating temperatures, chemically inert to gasoline and oil, and designed to maintain compression integrity across the long term.

Metal Ring · No Rubber Degradation
Specification Early Generation N01 Current Production
Primary Structure All-brass casting Steel — CNC-machined
Manufacturing Process Casting only Cast + CNC finish pass
Bearing / Assembly Fit Hand-fitted, inconsistent CNC-controlled, consistent
Surface Finish Spray lacquer High-temp baked enamel
Long-Term Wear Brass creep / bearing play Dimensionally stable steel
Weather / Heat Resistance Chips, fades over time Sealed, heat-bonded coat
Operating Noise Wider tolerances = more rattle Tighter fit, noticeably quieter
Cylinder Seal Rubber O-ring (degrades with heat & fuel) Precision metal sealing ring
Overall Quality Grade Entry-level collector 1–2 tiers above early gen

// Starting Methods

Two Ways to Wake It Up

Vintage Method

Manual Recoil Start

Wrap the included starter cord around the flywheel pulley and pull. The same ritual that started full-sized American farm engines on cold mornings — immediate mechanical feedback, no adapter, no batteries required.

Modern Method

Electric Drill Start

Chuck the included adapter rod into any cordless household drill, engage the starting shaft, and spin the engine to life in seconds. Ideal for quick demos, cold starts after storage, or fine-tuning the needle valve mid-session.

// Finishes

Three Period-Accurate Colorways

Each finish references a real tradition in American stationary engine history. All three share identical steel hardware, mechanical components, and hardwood display base. Click any image to view and order on the product page.

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Industrial Blue
Steam-era American machinery. Clean, workmanlike, factory-floor honest.
Classic
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Field Green
Deep farm green is the most historically resonant finish in early American stationary engine collecting. The classic color of the 1900–1930 era. Brass + hardwood + green = museum shelf.
Collector's Choice
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Barn Red
Early American factory red. Bold, warm, and unmistakably industrial.
Classic

// In the Box

Everything You Need to Run

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N01 Engine Assembly
With hardwood base & spark plug pre-installed
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Drill Starting Adapter Rod
Fits standard cordless drills
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Manual Recoil Cord & Handle
Included, ready to use
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Official User Manual
Tuning, fuel mix & first-run guide

⚠ Not included — you'll need:
1× AA 1.5V battery · 92+ octane gasoline · 10W-50 oil (2-stroke or 4-stroke)

// FAQ

Common Questions

Is it fully assembled when it arrives?+
Yes. The N01 is a true RTR (Ready-to-Run) build. The mechanical architecture, trip ignition system, and hardwood base are fully assembled and factory-tested before shipping. You only need 1× AA 1.5V battery and 92+ octane gasoline mixed with 10W-50 oil at a 25:1 to 30:1 ratio.
Do I need specialty oil for the drip oiler?+
No. Standard 2-stroke or 4-stroke 10W-50 motorcycle or automotive oil works for both the fuel pre-mix and the external drip oiler. One oil type covers both lubrication systems — no specialty products required.
How does the water cooling work?+
This replicates early "evaporative hopper cooling." Water sits in the open hopper above the cylinder, absorbs combustion heat, and steams off during operation. Fill with clean tap or distilled water before starting and top off for extended sessions. No plumbing, no pump, no closed circuit needed.
Can the engine speed be adjusted?+
Yes. The centrifugal flyweight governor sets the target RPM automatically — the hit-and-miss logic then fires or coasts to maintain that speed. You can fine-tune the governor setting and the carburetor needle valve to adjust how frequently the engine fires, giving you direct control over both speed and the cadence of the "miss" rhythm.
How long can it run on a single fill?+
Runtime depends on your governor setting and ambient conditions. The fuel tank is sized for desktop demonstration runs — typically 10–20 minutes per fill at normal operating cadence. The water hopper holds enough for a similar duration. For extended display sessions, top both off periodically. No minimum warm-up time is required.
Is needle valve tuning difficult for beginners?+
Not at all. The carburetor needle valve and mechanical ignition timing are pre-set to optimal baseline at the factory before shipping. For most users the engine fires straight out of the box. If you want to fine-tune the "miss" cadence for your altitude or ambient temperature, the included Official User Manual walks through every adjustment step by step.

— RETROL × OKMO · N01 · 1/5 Scale Hit-and-Miss Engine —

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RTR · Factory-Tested · Shipped in Custom Shockproof Carton
Steel + Brass + Aluminum · High-Temp Baked Enamel · Hardwood Base

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Arthurian Fae Quest…say less.
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A fae centered Arthurian tale unlike any I’ve read so far. The author did a great job at descriptive world building, with scenes easily playing out in my minds eye. There was plenty of action, suspense, and even a touch of horror. An enemies to lovers, slow burn romance, a quest, with plot twist and turns aplenty. There was a love triangle, which I’m not usually a fan of but, it played out well in this story line. The FMC, Morgan Pendragon, was so blatantly naïve, yet I typically expect as much in a ‘book one’ of a series, especially one that features a fairly sheltered princess. I was happy to read that in spite of this, she still showed a strong sense of morals, fire, and spine. Now our MMC? Kairos Draven, aka Void’s Edge. Oh, how I’m a sucker for a smoking’ hot grumpy warrior alpha with a witty mouth, and a strong sense of “touch her and die” attitude, so you know who held all my cards. That ending? Just made me swoon all the harder. Now add a battlecat that rivals the size of a horse…and well Ms. Briar Boleyn you have well and truly stolen my heart. I’m excited to see where the story goes from here, and follow along to see more of the characters growth. I went into this story fairly blind, and I think I enjoyed it all the more because of it. Once the story got going, it had me in an absolute chokehold and it was difficult to put down.
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Ariel
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★★★★★ 3
Not a bad start
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3 stars Thank you Netgalley and Briar Boleyn for the ARC! A camelot/king Arthur retelling with fae. I was hooked by the idea of this book immediately and was eager to jump into this world. • slow burn • enemies to lovers • who did this to you Morgan Pendragon watched her mother die by her father's hand when she was just eight years old, hiding under the bed. Morgan is believed to have the tainted blood of the fae in her veins and is cast aside so that her fathers illegitimate son, Arthur, can become the king. She's seen his cruel treatment of the fae firsthand, so when he sends her on a journey to find a fae weapon she seizes the opportunity to do more with her life. Along the way, she finds more than she could have imagined. I don't know a whole lot about King Arthur and Camelot but I had a lot of fun with this story! The plot has some similar tropes to popular romantasy books (From blood and ash) but there's enough originality here that it doesn't feel like I'm reading a copy. I liked how the fae were different in appearance than what is typical in most fantasy books I've read. In this book they have blue hair, violet skin and a wide range of other characteristics. I thought that the world building was easy to follow and I could easily immerse myself into this world. After reading the blurb I kept wondering when she was going to go on the journey to find Excalibur and it doesn't happen until around the 45% mark. The story is a bit slow at times but starts to pick up once they begin their journey to find Excalibur. The John Wick style Inn was a fun concept that I enjoyed reading about. There are a lot of similarities to this and FBAA and I would have liked to have it be a little more different, but I'm hoping book two will have the story turn into something of its own. Overall I enjoyed reading this story and I'm looking forward to reading book two especially after that ending.
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AMAZING debut novel!!!
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Plot ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Spice 🌶️🌶️.5 Romance 💘💘💘 Vibes ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Dual 1st person POV - Ara (26) & Rogue (39 - but looks mid-20s: they can live hundreds of years so this isn't that large of a gap as it could've been which I heavily appreciate lol) Tropes: enemies to lovers, fae/human wars (deep hatred for each other), shifters (dragons- MMC can only partial shift with wings), one horse, one bed, touch her and d!e, found family, abduction turned to freedom The Last Storm is the debut novel from JD Linton and let me tell you, you guys NEED to read this. The plot was engaging and the editing was was amazing (especially for a debut novel). Our FMC, Ara, is stuck in her gilded cage longing for a life outside of her small town. She uses her books to escape and live vicariously through the pages (honestly, relatable). After her father announces her betrothal to her childhood friend (to whom she has no romantic feelings for), Ara tumbles unknowingly into a desperate plot trying to stop the humans from slaughtering the Fae. As one can expect from an enemies to lovers / kidnapper/captive romance, Ara fights her attraction and lust towards our MMC, Rogue (the King of the Fae), for as long as she can. Upon seeing Ara for the first time, Rogue is instantly aware that she is his fated mate (not a spoiler). Since she is the General's only daughter, he plans to abduct her and use her as leverage to stop the brutality. During Ara's time in Rogue's captivity, their banter and chemistry continue to rise until they finally boil over and come together (quite literally, and many times I may add 😉). Here's what I LOVED: - Rogue continuously seeks advice from his elders and deeply respects their opinions and life experience and tries to implement their recommendations - Rogue makes many mistakes in the beginning but we see him actively work on not repeating them as the book progresses. The level of self-awareness and his ability to change his behavior was impressive - The magic system is intricate and we have only scraped the surface. As the series continues and Ara progresses in her powers, I'm sure we'll get to see more of this. I absolutely LOVE the messaging system that is used in this book. - Ara's struggles are so human and so raw. She is experiencing so much guilt and pain and hurt and getting to see her work through each of these emotions is inspiring. Especially as her and Rogue get closer and she learns she can lean on him as well, that she is not alone. - While this is the start of a series, there is NO cliffhanger! There's a bit of a teaser of something major that is going to happen at the start of the next book, but it's not a cliffhanger in the sense that we aren't sure if someone is going to live or d!e or if they'll be separated. For that, I am very thankful! This book was so much fun that I will definitely be returning to book 2, even if it takes several months (or longer since this is an debut author) to publish! - Lastly, the cover is GORGEOUS! And I love the title! I'll copy a few of my favorite quotes below so you can have a little taste of the author's writing and the world she's cultivated. 😊 Top Highlights from The Last Storm On days like this, when my heart was heavy and my mind clouded, I resorted to books— to escape, to forget, to find freedom where I had none. If I were to marry him, my face would always be turned to the window, searching for more, and if not that, I would be a shell of the person I am now. I stepped back to admire her, thr0bbing at the sight. She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. To ever exist. Nothing, no one, had ever deserved to be worshiped more. All men should be made to kneel before her. But she would have to settle for me. The taste of her met my t0ngue as my scent merged with hers, forever branding her. Mine. I l!cked the wound. Hers. Completely and utterly hers. I didn’t claim her in ownership. I claimed her as my one. Devoted myself to one. With that mark, my body and soul were bound to her. I would never be with anyone else, emotionally or physically. It would be her or no one, until my last breath. “Scream my name. Let everyone know who I belong to.” I had never really cared about the weather before, but now, clear skies meant everything to me, and I was grateful to see another calm morning. “There will never be another woman for me.” He paused. “Ever.” I stilled at his words. “What… Why?” “This”— his thumb slid down across the mark—“ is a symbol of… surrender. I know you believe that it was my claim upon you, but it wasn’t. It never was. I bound my body and soul to you, little storm.” “I also know that it is more than this tiny, insignificant mark on your skin that binds me to you. It’s you. All of you. Your strength and resilience. Your determination to endure no matter what fate throws at you. Your love for love and stories and hope. You are entirely the opposite of everything that I am and I would gladly wear your shackles if it meant I could have you.” My mate. Mine. And then everything shifted and I understood. I understood everything. The surrender. The deep, soul-craving longing. Bound. I was bound to him. Body and soul. Entirely his. “I would’ve waited forever,” he whispered back, understanding. Seriously, everyone.. add this to your TBR!!
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Ashlee
Lowell, US
★★★★★ 4
A Decent Fae Romance
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** 3.5 Stars rounded up to 4 ** First off I want to say that I found the author, J. D. Linton, on TikTok right before the release of the sequel. I bought the first 2 books to support her release, so congrats to her for the release of the sequel! Overall, I liked the story & plot, I liked the characters, and I liked the spice. The downfalls: not enough development between the characters for the romance, and it leaned a little heavy into the tropes. A lot of stuff is told to you, which could have been used as devices to drive the plot and emotions of the characters. 🛑🛑 Mild Spoilers ahead, I tried to hide the obvious ones 🛑🛑 This is very obviously a fated mates, which is a trope I usually really enjoy. But I wish the relationship between Ara & Rogue had much more development before it's realized that they're mates, instead of Rogue knowing almost immediately and using it for nefarious purposes (at least in the beginning before they get to know each other). By revealing this within the first quarter of the book, I feel like it leaves less room for them to fall for each other organically (albeit with help from the mating bond) and they love each other because of the mating bond. I was disappointed as soon as Rogue know (literally only 5% in) and I literally made a note: "As much as II love a good mating trope, I wish we had to work for it a little more. Where's the fun in just telling us?" I believe that by holding out and feeding the reader snippets of a potential bond, it would've been more rewarding as a reader. I also wish there was more world building - we are told of a war between human & fae but don't get to really experience any of it. Ara is sheltered in her human home, then sheltered in Rogue's castle. There's bits and pieces about what the war has done on either side - but we're more told of the aftermath and don't really experience any of it. Ara's father is supposed to be the king's #1 general - yet he is at home with his family & with Ara for the first couple chapters. Her, her family, nor her village seem to be affected by the 10 year war going on on their borders. I wish there was a little more setup to make this conflict - an actual war - feel more than a skirmish between fighting territories. Linton could also be a little repetitive - with the biggest culprit being when Ara is upset she "brings [her] knees to [her] chest]" and either sits like that or cries. Every time she is upset this phrase is mentioned. I would get it if this was her crutch, or how she copes with grief and stress, but that should be explained why she does it so often or it becomes repetitive. I started to get annoyed with how often she would sit like this solely because it happens every couple chapters. However, I did really like the spice. I love an enemies to lovers trope, especially when it results in spicy scenes. The spicy scenes weren't anything new, but they were fun. Wish there were more but that could also just be me - there is no such thing as too much spice 😂 Would I read again? Probably not, I'm super picky with rereads. Although I did genuinely enjoy my first read through! Will I continue the series? Probably, at least for the sequel. As for #3, kind of depends on where I am with my TBR once that is released All in all an enjoyable, fast paced read
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Ashton Taylor
Natrona Heights, US
★★★★★ 3
I love indie authors
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Let me preface this by saying—writing a book is HARD! Coming up with characters so real that they take on a life of their own, building an entire world, the political/magic system. Designing all of this is no easy feat. That being said. This book had so. Much. Potential. I was so excited to read this book, and I plan to finish it for the sake of finishing it. But. At this point, I would have set I’d aside as a DNF. The book could have benefited from some form of a developmental editor, or an in depth beta reader. I will say this. Within 5 chapters, there are so many… phrases that I’ve highlight that I’ve latched onto. Phrases about books and storms that were written BEAUTIFULLY! So, bravo Linton for hitting the nail on the head as to why readers disappear like they do! However, 5 chapters in and I can already guess where a majority of the story is going. But that’s also because I read like a mad-woman and have read this particular type of story, many different ways. Enemies to lovers where the FMC isn’t who she thinks she is. I am all about supporting indie authors. BUT. I also feel like criticism should be constructive, and not degrading. So if I could give this book a 4 1/2, strictly because I know the work the author put into this, I would. So if you’re looking for an easy read with characters that aren’t hard to follow, look no further! They are easy to love and easy to care for. One of the biggest issues they lacked, to me, was depth and plausible reactions to their situations. JD, you have done BEAUTIFULLY writing this book. I applaud and will continue to buy your books in the future. My BIGGEST recommendation is to definitely hire some form of an editor for any upcoming books. Or in turn, I will be happy to beta read for you. Should my opinion change of the book by the time I finish, I will happily get on here and say I was wrong, delete this review and post a different one. Until then…
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